Cao Tai

[Cao Tai]

"I am the steel behind my fathers iron wall!"
- Cao Tai

ABOUT THE PLAYER

Player Name/Alias: Jack
Player Age: 18
Player Gender: Male
How did you find us?: guys
What is the 5th bold rule point in section one of the rules?: OOC

ABOUT THE CHARACTER

Name: Cao Tai
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Style: Original
Residence: Xinye

THE PERSONALITY

Although still a youngster Cao Tai has the heart and bravery of his father, although he lacks his fathers experiences they are very similar. Cao Tai is courages but not foolish, some say he has a old head on a young body. Family values shine through in the way Tai conducts himself, he has formed a strong bond with ever member of the Cao clan, especially with his father. He would fight to the death if it meant saving the life of a family member. Despite possessing enormous talent beyond his age Cao Tai is very grounded, occasionally he is arrogant but this is usually on the battlefield and all of the time directed at his opponents. He respects his elders and most importantly his comrades, he wouldn't put someone in danger to further his fame and wealth.

THE APPEARANCE

Cao Tai stands at 6'4, he weighs 196 pounds of pure muscle, however due to his long legs and the power generated by his legs he still is a fast runner despite his size. He has medium length black hair which sits just short of his shoulders. His eyes are as blue as the midday sky. However despite his 'thuggish' looks, he is a well educated man.

In battle he wears a mixture of leather and iron armors, bleached a light blue to look nearly like a cloudless sky. He covers most of this armor with blue cloth. He does not wear a helmet as he feels it can impair his vision.

He also wears silver armor of a similar fashion on occasion, but the expense of that armor keeps him wearing it to every battle. Instead, that armor is used for ceremony and the most important of battles.

THE HISTORY

Cao Tai is the son of famed general Cao Ren. He was born in Chen Liu but moved to Ye after Guandu to receive a good education. He then moved on from normal education to receive a military education which his father had organised for him when he was 12.

During this education he worked on a farm because of his fathers order, this would build up his strength for later which Ren knew would be vital for his sons development, whilst on the farm he learnt the importance of conservation of food and gold which led to him developing management skills. As he grew older more workers on the farm respected him and listened to what he had to say.

When he left education he moved around where ever his father was stationed, watching what he was doing and learning how to govern, the management skills developed whilst on the farm helped him greatly, allowing him to excel in governship.

When he reached the age of 16, he accompanied his father in battle, having received prior training with the main army. He led a small contingent of soldiers under the guidance of Cao Ren and done well given his lack of experience.

He has now been tasked with the defence of Jing with his father, he hopes that he could drive the counter attack when the Shu and Wu dogs fail against his father defence.

[Brian]

I really can't accept this. You need to put a little bit more work into this character.

[Cao Tai]

Added a bit more to history and a lot to appearance.

[Kyle]

I'm not trying to be a dick or bother you intentionally, but if you can write three paragraphs about his appearance, I would expect you to write more than that for your character's history. Of course technically you did write exactly thirty words more in his history than his appearance, but my point remains.

If you can format your history into the three paragraphs required, then I'll approve because I don't want you to feel forced to add in filler to make the history longer.

[Cao Tai]

done

[Kyle]

Approved, bro. Now go make Cao Ren proud. =D